NeonKunSama

Rest in peace Akira Toriyama, Dragon Ball defined my childhood, nothing will ever top that.

NeonKunSama

Hey guys it’s been a bit… sorry just been distracted by other things. Just wanted to let you know that I’m gonna Unpublished the Across the Spider-Verse Story for the time being… Reason being is I kinda rushed myself to get the story out when I didn’t have a solid idea for the plot and how to incorporate AJ into the story. So hopefully I can do a better job. And yes I have a way to see the movie so I’ll definitely take the time to look back at it. Hope you guys understand.

NeonKunSama

@Ruben2714 I’ll make sure to keep this in mind.
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TayAstra2005

In the new version will you also give like a bio? To show his appearance and rundown of his powers?
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TayAstra2005

Look forward to reading the improved version
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NeonKunSama

Hey guys, hope you’re doing well. I just want a little input from you guys about the Across the Spider Verse story, I know it’s not finished yet but I feel like it can be a lot better… do you guys have any thoughts or suggestions ? Leave a comment.
          
          
          
          
          
          
          Also one last thing… would you guys like to see The Spot fight someone else besides the Spider group ? Maybe a quick one off battle ?

MBS_41

@NeonKunSama It would be cool if you added more villains too for each spider to fight.
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Doctmar123

@NeonKunSama I want to see like honesty spiders and PS4 Spider-Man side with Miles and Adande as well.
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TheGoon187

Would be dope to see insomniac spider man interact with the spider group or with your oc due to them having similar experiences with doc ock.
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NeonKunSama

WOW 10K views :)))
          
          
          
          
          Thanks for the support ! 
          
          
          
          I’m working hard to make this next project just as good. So please bare with me. Like I said I’m always willing to answer any question. Rather it be about the story, random thoughts or just questions you wanna know about myself.

NeonKunSama

@HoshinoGakki honestly I don’t entirely remember how it came to be. If I was being realistic probably just a random thought I had one day.
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HoshinoGakki

@NeonKunSama How did you come up with your OC? Like was it a shower thought or was it in the works for awhile?
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NeonKunSama

Thank you guys for the amazing support on my spider verse story…  it truly means a lot to me :)
          
          
          For that reason let’s do a Q&A ! I’ll answer whenever I get the chance.

HoshinoGakki

@NeonKunSama The way you successfully incorporated your OC with the actual timeline of the movie, without making it seem totally off canon, was very impressive and amazing to read. The way that you still built up a bond between the OC and Gwen without breezing through it. I very much enjoyed this book; In my opinion it's like watching the actual movie again. I love your OC, a young teen that went down the wrong path and matured too quickly. Not as old as Peter B nor too inexperienced as Miles, just another spider man. I could honestly go on about all the pro's of your book. No con's about your book. Honestly can't wait for your next book, keep up the great work.
            
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playmaker1444

@NeonKunSama I really liked the dynamic that he had with miles and the others I liked how more than any of the spiders he was the one who could relate to miles I also liked that teased romance that he has with Gwen and I can’t wait to see his friendship with miles in the sequel and a possibility of a romance with Gwen.
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TheGoon187

I like your oc and the way he interacted with the characters felt natural! The fact he thought about giving up on being spider man and then miles was one of the reasons he got inspired to keep going was some great stuff!
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