Elizabeth Kaiser

Hi! :D Would you mind if I asked you to check out my story? 
          
          here is the link:
           http://www.wattpad.com/story/10030512-involuntarily-falling 
          
          i need your feedback :) thanks in advance. God bless you :D

Ok So i m Writing a new Book its called Letters to Eleanor.
          I just wrote 1 Chapter tho.
          any ways it would be great if you would critique.
          
          
          
          
          P.S: If you wanna suggest sth plz inbox it. xxx
          
          -_Swaggxr ( Melody)

Could you please critique my book "The Memoirs of Scarlett Wilson" ? You'll find it on my profile.
          
          Thank you xx

Hi, I see that you critique books. Maybe you could read my short story. Hope you like it. It's called "Diary".
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/11972804-diary

Hi. =)
          First, thank you so much for reading Wallpaper.
          Second, thank you so so much for adding it to your reading list.
          Lastly, thank you a gazillion times for your what you said in your status. It made me smile. =)
          
          Have a gorgeous day. 
          
          Love, Mackenzie.

Hello. =)
                  I just published a new, completed short story called Wallpaper. Can you critique it?
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/12469409-wallpaper

Hey. I'd love it If you can critic this story.
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/12368412-false-hope

Hi Elizabeth - I'd love to see if I'm good enough to make your hall of fame :)  Please feel free to drop by Niq when you have time - http://www.wattpad.com/story/12267163-niq-new-adult

You're welcome love. :)

Sure. :)