AuthoressX57
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Just finished reading Flabby Patty and I must say, I actually liked it. I think I finished it one day, unable to stop reading chapter after chapter because it was that interesting. One minute I disliked Hunter, the next minute I grow super suspicious about his behaviour. I always knew Mac was an asshole because he seemed to good to be true. :) In conclusion, I liked your story!