Novellorange

I'm becoming so frustrated! 
          	
          	Soo, after reading a blog site, they made a lot of good points that better your writing. Basically, they said to not over explain and show explanations through actions and words instead of just stating it. 
          	
          	I understand it, but it's so hard to actually apply it to my writing. 
          	
          	I'm stuck in a stump and I don't know what to do about it.

Novellorange

@slavetostories tysm!!! Your advice is has me thinking about going back through my chapters and editing them all over again. I think cutting them short and adding action will really help.
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EscritoraMia

@slavetostories I had a hard time with this too! In a first draft, I recommend almost ignoring the advice if you need to — just write it the way that comes naturally first. Then, on a second draft, it can help to look at your "telling" paragraphs and just ask, how can I show this? Sometimes it means adding whole scenes and pages, but sometimes just replacing summary by having a character say it in dialogue can help — a little goes a long way :)
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NoelleUnknown

Hey I don’t want to sound rude or anything but are you alive ?

NoelleUnknown

@slavetostories Thank you! I really like the style of the book it’s quite refreshing I hope I can read more of your works!
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Novellorange

@Noelle08L hey it’s no problem thanks for asking! 
            I had no idea that others were really reading this, I’ve been doing it for my own enjoyment.
            I do have a couple of chapters in progress but I like to plan the story line ahead of time. I don’t have a schedule either, so that interferes with my writing as well. 
            Since you asked, I don’t mind posting another chapter today! 
            Be on the lookout ;-)
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NoelleUnknown

I really like the book so far the MHA one (btw)
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Beefcupcakes

Thanks for reading and voting on my story! I appreciate it! (◍•ᴗ•◍)

Beefcupcakes

@slavetostories 
            I'm so glad you like it! (/･ω･(-ω-)
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Novellorange

@Beefcupcakes Of couse! Its my new favorite! One of the best ive read!
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Novellorange

I'm becoming so frustrated! 
          
          Soo, after reading a blog site, they made a lot of good points that better your writing. Basically, they said to not over explain and show explanations through actions and words instead of just stating it. 
          
          I understand it, but it's so hard to actually apply it to my writing. 
          
          I'm stuck in a stump and I don't know what to do about it.

Novellorange

@slavetostories tysm!!! Your advice is has me thinking about going back through my chapters and editing them all over again. I think cutting them short and adding action will really help.
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EscritoraMia

@slavetostories I had a hard time with this too! In a first draft, I recommend almost ignoring the advice if you need to — just write it the way that comes naturally first. Then, on a second draft, it can help to look at your "telling" paragraphs and just ask, how can I show this? Sometimes it means adding whole scenes and pages, but sometimes just replacing summary by having a character say it in dialogue can help — a little goes a long way :)
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Novellorange

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