OGO_Silence

Ran into a few issues whilst updating the dark knights emperor and will need some time to correct it futhermore, i was hoping to get the first few chapters of my new story uploaded however it turns out that i need to redo some chapters as transforming effects to abilities is much harder to do when it contradicts the whole system. The preloud should have been out yet i reread it and i belive there is another 10 to 15k words to go.
          	

OGO_Silence

Ran into a few issues whilst updating the dark knights emperor and will need some time to correct it futhermore, i was hoping to get the first few chapters of my new story uploaded however it turns out that i need to redo some chapters as transforming effects to abilities is much harder to do when it contradicts the whole system. The preloud should have been out yet i reread it and i belive there is another 10 to 15k words to go.
          

OGO_Silence

Okay, im needing a few new beta readers to help with the new story that i've got. i don't mind about experince as its better if i have a bigger pool of diverse readers than fixating on a type. If you're interested hit me with a message and we'll go from there. 
          
          Thank you 
          

OGO_Silence

Apologies if it says that it's failed on the upload for the new chapter. It is an accident, I was working on the other chapters and accidentally uploaded one. Currently chapter 6 is being reviewed, therefore i've decided to rework and reorder chapters 15-20 and 21 as the structure is causing me a headache 

OGO_Silence

My apologies for not updating anyone on the story its been a crazy time with moving and restarting. However, I have been doing work and the next two chapters have been written and just needs to be sent in to review, I have just read some of the comments that people have written and first I wanna say thank you for them and every comment is welcome even if you want to tear a new one. So for those that are waiting the next two will be up when reviews have come back, if you want to be a reader for the other chapters (up to 9 rn) please feel free yo drop a message thank you.

SkimReader07

The question is if you know the lore and can make things believable, if you can't do that, people won't be interested. Sorry if I sound like a prick, but I prefer it when people throw themselves into the story, not self insert, but are integrating things, not haphazardly, and have a direction, that's all

OGO_Silence

Chapters 5, 6 and 7 times ticking. 

OGO_Silence

@draigr1000 furthermore I, am adding new media in some spots which conflicts with the structuring of some portions. 
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OGO_Silence

@OGO_Silence I have been rereading the story and through some people reading it, I thought a clearer understanding would need to be established. Therefore I redid the chapter and chapter 2 will be altered a little. I apologise if it has confused anyone. Moving forward I will announce any changes that will take place before they get implemented.
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draigr1000

@OGO_Silence is there a reason you redid chapter 1
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