This is my first attempt at writing a full story - though it didn't begin that way. Originally, I started writing short scenes and character sketches, mostly about Darius, without any real intention to create a book. But over a few months, the pieces grew and started to form something bigger.
I was a primary school teacher for many years, until a neurological condition - cluster headaches - meant I had to leave the profession. Writing became a new creative outlet, something to focus on and explore while adapting to a very different pace of life.
I've always loved stories that centre emotion, tension, and complex characters - and I'm still figuring it all out as I go.
I'm new to long-form storytelling, so every comment counts-whether it's praise, critique, or thoughtful questions. If something strikes a chord or jars you, I'd love to hear about it. Your insights will help shape the journey ahead, making this story richer and more authentic. Thanks for being part of this adventure.
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Stories by Laich Mirbane
- 2 Published Stories

The Custodian of Time
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In a future shaped by collapse and calculation, humanity no longer uses money, but time. Every citizen's life...

The Art of Release-Three men. Thre...
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The Art of Release follows Darius, a man whose body speaks louder than his words-tattooed, powerful, and drif...