PatrikTak

While two of my upcoming stories are still being worked on, and will not be released until they are fully finished. 
          	I wanted to ask you all, to rate these three dangerously beautiful Ladies both from Marvel and DC, from 1 to 3. Tell me which ones you like better, I look forward to your comments. 
          	
          	Fyi, for those who don't know comics much, just look on the internet. 
          	
          	Now the Ladies are: 
          	
          	Marvel: 
          	
          	Emma Frost, one of the most powerful Xmen. 
          	
          	Jessica Drew also known as Spiderwoman. 
          	
          	Miss Marvel as Carol Danvers. 
          	
          	DC: 
          	
          	Huntress as Helena Bertinelli. 
          	
          	Zatanna Zatara. 
          	
          	Diana Prince as Wonder Woman.

PatrikTak

@Fanir996 Thanks Fanir, appreciate it.
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Fanir996

@PatrikTak Emma, Jess, Carol DC: Zatanna, Huntress, Diana
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PatrikTak

@Fanir996 Ok, but you are supposed to rate them from 1 to 3, and both from DC and Marvel
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PatrikTak

While two of my upcoming stories are still being worked on, and will not be released until they are fully finished. 
          I wanted to ask you all, to rate these three dangerously beautiful Ladies both from Marvel and DC, from 1 to 3. Tell me which ones you like better, I look forward to your comments. 
          
          Fyi, for those who don't know comics much, just look on the internet. 
          
          Now the Ladies are: 
          
          Marvel: 
          
          Emma Frost, one of the most powerful Xmen. 
          
          Jessica Drew also known as Spiderwoman. 
          
          Miss Marvel as Carol Danvers. 
          
          DC: 
          
          Huntress as Helena Bertinelli. 
          
          Zatanna Zatara. 
          
          Diana Prince as Wonder Woman.

PatrikTak

@Fanir996 Thanks Fanir, appreciate it.
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Fanir996

@PatrikTak Emma, Jess, Carol DC: Zatanna, Huntress, Diana
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PatrikTak

@Fanir996 Ok, but you are supposed to rate them from 1 to 3, and both from DC and Marvel
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PatrikTak

After much consideration, the low popularity of Theodosian Dragonlords fanfic coupled with the loss of written chapters on the external hard drive I am officially discontinuing the story indefinitely. I am sorry for those who like it, but circumstances forced me to do so. However, that doesn't mean I will not publish any more stories, I have a new one at work called Last Aesir. 
          
          So for now stay safe and bye.

Fanir996

@PatrikTak I'm going to delete Gothams strongest and remake it again
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Fanir996

Got it
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PatrikTak

@Fanir996 Yes
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Fanir996

I know I said I am going on break for a year and I still am just doing the final chapter of your Thor story once and a while but I could use your opinion

Fanir996

@Fanir996 okay I understand
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PatrikTak

@Fanir996 She is inspired by her, end of story.  Thrúd is her father's daughter and has powers from him while Kal is his mother's son, having solely Kryptonian powers plus with both having immunity to magic, and greater talent to wield it.
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Fanir996

@Fanir996 so is it?
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Fanir996

Have you tried writing Anime Fanfiction, it might work

PatrikTak

@Fanir996 Havent you been paying attention, they are dealing with Kang, which means travel between realities, universes etc
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Fanir996

@Fanir996 Also what are the avengers doing in the Son of Thor fanfiction
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Fanir996

@Fanir996 cool
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PatrikTak

I wanted to know what you think about my new fanfiction story, Theodosian Dragonlords. What are your thoughts on it, and its setting? 
          
          Thedas or rather Dragon Age universe was not my first choice of where the story would unveil. At first, I was thinking about The Witcher universe, it was there where my new OC was meant to go. So what do you think is better Thedas or Continent, which choice was better or worse?
          
          Another thing is the romance option, who do you think should Jaeneron end up with? Should it be Daenerys, Rhaenyra or someone else? I put it on your shoulders so you can make that choice. After all is because of you, I wouldn't be writing if it wasn't for you. 
          
          I will be happy for any comment and suggestion, stay safe.

Fanir996

I need a favor to promote the prequel before the sequel story about the parents of the Oc so please I need your help

Fanir996

@Fanir996 thank you
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PatrikTak

@Fanir996  Its good, I like it.
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Fanir996

@Fanir996 so what did you think
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Fanir996

What would the Justice League do when they get on the ship

PatrikTak

In short most of the team would swiftly move through Kang’s defences and find him in his throne room, but as soon as they try to attack him, most of the JL members would have to be recalled to help Avengers, cause of massive advantage he has in soldiers, so only Magni will stay to face him while Bruce aka Batman will try to disable the ship defenses and systems. That’s about the short of it
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Fanir996

I could use your help writing this your input please 
          
          Justice League / Avengers P.O.V
          
          
          At the outskirts of Kang's society was the rest of the justice league and Avengers ,because of the forcefield surrounding the ciy. Then the forcefield turns off.
          
          Kara: "They did it, the forcefield's down."
          
          Magni and Barry goes to both teams each running and flying respectively.
          
          Flash: "Alright, Mission complete."
          
          Thor: "Hahaha that's my son !"
          
          Magni: *smiles and nods* "Thank you Father."
          
          Batman: "Alright now that the field 's down, everyone stick to the plan."
          
          Everyone nods, and starts running into Kang's Civilization. That's when the Justice League and Avengers split up, with Justice League attacking Kang's Ship. While the Avengers attack his citadel.

PatrikTak

At the outskirts of Kang’s Capital, gathered the rest of the League along with the Avengers. They were waiting for while, when they spotted the force field going down. 
            
            "Kara: They did it." Then she saw how Magni and Barry approached them, flying and speeding respectively. 
            
             Flash: "Alright, the first leg of the plan is complete, now what?" 
            
            Thor: "It’s time I have words with him!" Thor slightly pats his hammer. 
            
            Batman: "No, we stick to the plan, we will deal with his while you attack his Citadel to divert his main force. Remember don’t go alone!" 
            
            Captain America: "Batman is right, we need to assist each other, we cannot do it by ourselves, that is why we have these communicators, use them." Star-spangled veteran pointed to Avengers communicator card, that even the JL got. 
            
            With everyone knowing the plan, both team went their own way. One of the hardest fights was waiting for them, for Kang’s legions were vast and his ship Damocles even more dangerous. 
            
            Something like this
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Fanir996

Well I've been writing the chapter and I want your criticism 
          
          3rd P.O.V
          
          We continue the story inside Kang's Civilization, with two Quantumnauts. They walk towards the entrance of elevator that leads up to a guard tower. They both walk in pressing a button that leads to the top of the tower, the elevator doors close as the elevator started elevating.
          
          Quantumnaut 1: "That went smoothly."
          
          Quantumnaut 1 takes off his helmet, revealing its Magni Thorson aka Thunderer. He smiles as he turns to the other Quantumnaut. 
          
          Quantumnaut 2: "I'll say !"
          
          The other Quantumnaut takes off his helmet, revealing its Bary Allen the Superhero Flash. 
          
          Flash: "When we reach the top were going to have to take them down."
          
          Magni: *Smirks* "Then let's finish this quickly."
          
          Barry: *Nods smiling* "You got it !"

PatrikTak

"I hate you both!" Exclaimed the "helpless speedster" while being in the elevator that was heading to the top floor one of the Kang's perimeter towers. In order to infiltrate his city, they had to shut down the energy shields first. Otherwise the whole plan would go awry almost immediately. 
            
            Something like this, for example. Though it still good
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PatrikTak

Ok: 
            1. Suggestion: I would change Quantumnaut to Kang’s soldier, legionary. It sounds better, more official, more soldierly like. Or Conqueror legionary. 
            2. Suggestion: I would change the 3rd POV to something more personal but still it should retain the 3rd POV system. It’s very good though but, if you encounter a problem, just reread my past chapters for inspiration as how it should look.
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