Paxton Jill

hii

I will try to frequently update the book since medyo light na din naman yung schedule ko.

Hi, this is just a random message. Can you support my BxB story entitled "It's You"? I hope you support it. 
          
          Here's the link if you have time: https://my.w.tt/pYMoYUL9q8
          
          Please check it out! Thank You! 
          I hope you support it and enjoy it! Happy Reading! 
          Note: Hindi po s'ya intense and hot, fluffy and soft story lang po. 

Thank you sa mga sumusuporta sa libro kk❤️ hopefully you will appreciate one of my new story dito sa Watty

CHASING DANIEL SAAVEDRA JUST REACHED 3K READS. OWEMJI. ❤️ THE MILESTONE I REACHED. KET DI SIYA GANUN KA RAMI GAYA NG IBANG STORIES I FEEL SO APPRECIATED. ❤️

Thank you for the follow!! sana mabasa nyo din po ang mga story ko!! ❤❤❤

I'll update ASAP

sinong magpapagawa ng book cover? PM me guys.

So eto criticism ko 
          Maganda naman yung kwento,
          Eto lang talaga, yung sa  pag  outline  mo hindi sa lahat ng pagkakataon uunahin mo yung sinasabi nila tapos yung action, pwede mo ding unahin yung action then yung sasabihin nila  for  example : "hoy ikaw!" Sabi niya habang hinahabol ako - basically eto yung speak-act 
          Tapos eto  yung  sabi kong unahin ang act bago mag salita : hinabol niya ako dahil sa galit  mabilis siyang tumakbo at tinawag ako "hoy, ikaw!" - so yan  ang  ibig sabihin  ko, so far okay  naman  yung plot mo, and yung pag magsasalita ang character sa isip niya, pwede mong i-italic para mas malaman na thoughts niya lang. Yun  lang partner! Good job! Fighting!

Thank you very much for following.