Love4NovelGuy

This may sound like criticism (and it probably is) but I read A Cadet in Another World and found the pacing off due to the lack of foundation for each big event. The fight between Karma and the Titan was extremely short for no apparent reason. Plus, the reaction the survey core had towards a child jumping a few feat into the air and killing a Titan was a little bland since normal people would immediately scream and attack. The fact they see him as a member of the same race is strange since not only can he manipulate his limbs. Overall, you just have to slow down and try to flesh out the characters more (since even people who know of the Anime Character would be confused by the sheer number of big events.)

Love4NovelGuy

Fudge, I now notice it was in a reading, so embarrassing~
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PhobiaOfYou

@Love4NovelGuy um hello im not the author lol, sorry
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Nai-chai

Hey you, I'm here to bother you again

PhobiaOfYou

Same as ever and u 
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Nai-chai

How's life treating you?
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PhobiaOfYou

@Nai-chai lol well hey you too
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Nai-chai

*peeks behind dark corner creepily* ...Freak-san.....

PhobiaOfYou

@Nai-chai lol your welcome ^~^
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Nai-chai

Ima need it... thank u T~T
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PhobiaOfYou

@Nai-chai  I wish you luck ^~^
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