Pie78904

I'm heartbroken to hear about the passing of The Unknown's VA, Zoey Alexandria. Unknown is literally my favorite killer in DBD, it's actually one of the reasons why i came back to the game and is the reason why I'm working on my dbd fic.
          	
          	She brought to life to one of my favorite characters of all time. As i really love everything about The Unknown from its design, to it's lore and of course the voice acting that Zoey gave to it.
          	
          	So all i can say is Thank you Zoey and may you rest in peace.
          	
          	
          	
          	

Pie78904

@GalaxySky67 it's sad, she was a very talented voice actress and i loved her performance for The Unknown. 
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GalaxySky67

@Pie78904 Wait, Zoey passed away?! I didn't know about that and I just started playing BDB too. That's really sad... May Zoey rest in peace...
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TheCarlosInferno

Hey pal, when are we gonna see an update on your stories 

TheCarlosInferno

@ TheCarlosInferno  It was Kiriko yes
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Pie78904

@TheCarlosInferno If it's the DBD one I've delayed it till June. If it's Kiriko I'm trying to get The Imposter and another chapter out by the end of May
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lavarainlz

I just found your stories again and loved reading you put so much work into and they are very much fun to read, and I can't wait to see what you do for the D.va story may have the (Y/N) Character like a titanfall 2 pilot to match with D.va and her mech with the two working together one on the outside while one is in the mech. Seeing how you have spirts for the Kiriko  (Y/N). Either way I can't wait to read more of your stuff for whatever you may write!!

Pie78904

I'm heartbroken to hear about the passing of The Unknown's VA, Zoey Alexandria. Unknown is literally my favorite killer in DBD, it's actually one of the reasons why i came back to the game and is the reason why I'm working on my dbd fic.
          
          She brought to life to one of my favorite characters of all time. As i really love everything about The Unknown from its design, to it's lore and of course the voice acting that Zoey gave to it.
          
          So all i can say is Thank you Zoey and may you rest in peace.
          
          
          
          

Pie78904

@GalaxySky67 it's sad, she was a very talented voice actress and i loved her performance for The Unknown. 
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GalaxySky67

@Pie78904 Wait, Zoey passed away?! I didn't know about that and I just started playing BDB too. That's really sad... May Zoey rest in peace...
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Pie78904

I hope you guys enjoyed the bio for the DBD fanfic. I wanted to give it a unique presentation with Y/N being by the campfire and writing everything down on a journal. Instead of the usual Bio.
          
          Be on the look out for the first four chapters
          
          Hope you don't mind the whole thing with Bonds, giving Y/N upgrades to himself. Which originally was going to be used in the Kiriko fanfic where the crow spirit was supposed to grow it's power from Y/N interacting with the Yōkai members.
          
          Lastly i know you are all interested in who will be Y/N's romance interest for this story. The answer is very simple It's....... Nicolas Cage....jk

Pie78904

I think the reason for why I'm really interested in writing the DBD fanfic. Is because i get to make a protagonist who progresses throughout the story compared to the other protagonists. 
          
          
          I'm kind of excited to write a protagonist who starts off as a scared confused guy. Then as the story progresses he starts getting used to the environment he's in. Then at the end he becomes a badass horror protagonist.
          
          Instead of someone who's already gonna take the fight immediately. As seen with Y/N from the Kiriko fic.

Essolounvato

@ Pie78904  In terms of grammar it is true that there are still some errors, but I would recommend you first write it in Word and then put it in Wattpad, but I was referring to literary maturity, but as for what you say, I tell you that you have more creativity than the average here, I loved your story, maybe you lack a little knowledge of how to execute it, but you can improve
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Pie78904

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@Essolounvato i don't think it is, because i still have shit grammer. But it's probably more of thoughts and ideas that come to mind. It just depends on how well i can execute it
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Pie78904

I just the saw Season 10 trailer and it's theme has been one that I've been waiting for.
          
          It gives me a good time to release this bonus chapter that i was gonna save for the end.
          
          Let's just say we'll be seeing a version of Y/N that followed behind his father's footsteps

GalaxySky67

@Pie78904 So this bonus chapter is like a universe where Y/N joined the Hoshimoto instead of Yokai? Nice, totally looking forward.
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Essolounvato

@ Pie78904  
            To be honest, this has been one of my favorite (if not favorite) themes of all, since now they do not use an external theme with a general concept, but now the theme is about the universe of Overwatch itself and they play with own concepts of the game, it is no longer a general and well-known concept, now it is typical of overwatch
            
            BTW i'm really curious of what You said 
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mealtyfan123

Hey Pie, just wondering if the Kiriko x male reader next chapter is still available, and why is delayed, just curious for a guy who read everything of this fic myself.

mealtyfan123

That’s fine, just wondering, continue to be u, and have some time to yourself.
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Pie78904

@mealtyfan123 I've been focusing on School work and playing Persona 3. I promise next chapter will be out in march. I just never found the motivation to write it yet
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Essolounvato

@ Pie78904  Wow, then I must give it a read.  
          
          By the way, I'm not going to deny that arc 1 had a lot of potential that perhaps you didn't take full advantage of, but it also doesn't overshadow the rest of the story, which seems to me to be very above average, quite well done.