Portia-487

There. I spend six months at this story. At the end, I feel this story is quite meaningless and speechless. I don't know what do you guys think at it. If you could manage to read it untill the end of the story, then you are way too strong at hold this crappiness. 
          	
          	It is fine if you ignore it. I don't force you to read it. 
          	
          	Have a nice day, guys. :) 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/248006072

Portia-487

There. I spend six months at this story. At the end, I feel this story is quite meaningless and speechless. I don't know what do you guys think at it. If you could manage to read it untill the end of the story, then you are way too strong at hold this crappiness. 
          
          It is fine if you ignore it. I don't force you to read it. 
          
          Have a nice day, guys. :) 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/248006072

Portia-487

Is it okay to not write for a long time?

Portia-487

@IvoryStarr That's sound cool. Thx.
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IvoryStarr

@Portia-487 Also, I looked through your conversations and noticed that you're struggling with writing, and I have a resource to help you: https://www.coursera.org/specializations/good-with-words 
            It's a free online course you can take to improve your English writing skills. You have to pay to do the full thing at once, but if you scroll down and see that there are 4 separate courses, you can take them one by one for free! I really hope it helps, and keep trying, you will definitely get better! 
            Also, may I suggest you try writing in your own language, while at the same time improving your English language skills by reading lots, as well as a bit of writing? That way you can refine your storytelling skills without sacrificing good language.
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Portia-487

@IvoryStarr Thank you. But I don't have the motivation to do it to be honest.
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Portia-487

What

Portia-487

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@Portia-487 Fuck.
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Portia-487

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@Portia-487 Hey, bitch, believe it or not, someone look through all your fucking messages
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yashu07

Heyyy ! ^_^ 
          
          Can u pls take out some time to give my poetry book a read ? I would really appreciate it and ur honest opinions about it ! https://www.wattpad.com/story/243564854-sensitive-as-raindrops 
          
          And pls give my story 'Insatiable' a try too, 
          it's about a bad boy Rockstar Ian and sassy innocent girl Raven! And how they become lovers from haters with overcoming their pasts and living the future together! 
          
          I hope you find it interesting enough to continue reading it ! ❤ 
             Have a nice day !!! ❤

yashu07

@Portia-487  no probs ! ❤
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Portia-487

@yashu07 Thanks for your help. I will get try one day.
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yashu07

@Portia-487  Thank u ❤... When I first started writing, that is my poems book, I didnt know how to promote but I saw people giving their suggestions...so i gained up some courage to give them a message for checking my book out and how much it would mean to me. 
            So, I guess, if you want to promote urs, and want  ppl to read and why, start giving them msgs like the one i sent...gradually you'll do! 
            it'll also help u to be more open towards this community ! : )
            all the best!!! (✿◠‿◠)
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Portia-487

The hardest thing to do to me is go back to write my story. 

Portia-487

@Portia-487 You told me your biggest wish is try to finish your story 
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Portia-487

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I feel like I didn't improve anything. I feel like I am just wasting my time and my whole life to writing a pointless story. The judges who read my story will be the most unlucky person because they are wasting their time to read my shit. 
          
          

Luciatls123

@Portia-487 Your story's setting was quite interesting. But, I do admit it was hard to read. Everyone has the potential to improve, so do you. So, all I want to say is don't give up
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