_simbaw

Ahaaa hiiii it's me again!!!
          
          I am now about to read Taken the second series! And I just wanna say I LOVE the way how you write the fight scenes!
          
          Uhhh if you don't mind me asking, how did you manage to pull off that part? I've been trying to write but I just couldn't choreograph the fight scene in my head and even if I did, it looks ridiculous ;-;

Quietlegends

@_simbaw Hi love!! Thank you so much! I really appreciate that because fight scenes are my absolute favorite thing to write! I had a lot of fun experimenting with that in "Taken" since it was the first story I wrote! I'm not sure how much helpful advice I can give, but for me, I visualize everything I write as if it were a movie in my head. Its the easiest way to see what's going on in my scenes. If I can't picture it, I'll research some visual references like a kitchen for instance, and plot it out with images. If I'm still having trouble, I talk through my scenes aloud and even act them out sometimes to really get a good picture lol.  It's different for all people though, I'm a visual writer, some people will storyboard the scenes, or bullet list them, or bubble graph them, etc. Sometimes finding the way that works for you can be tough. It always helps to get a fresh set of eyes on a piece or even a beta reader to help work through a difficult scene. But don't worry, everything I write sounds ridiculous to me because we are always our own worst critics, so don't let that stop you!
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_simbaw

I'll give you a follow because I want to support you as a writer and you deserve it :3

_simbaw

@Quietlegends PLS TAKEN IS SO GOOD I JUST CAN'T SJJEHDHDHDBHDHDH♥♥
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Quietlegends

@_simbaw ❤❤aww thank you so much!!  You're too kind!
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