BrylleAndrewJualo
Hey man, any news or progress in the Date and Subjugate so far?
RainSennin
RainSennin
Kotori
Tohka
Yoshino
Origami
Kaguya
Yuzuru
Miku
Natsumi
Kurumi
Mukuro
Mana
Reine/Mio
Mayuri
BrylleAndrewJualo
@RainSennin Just wanted to ask again. Will you include the Spirits from the Visual Novels? Like Rinne, Maria, Marina, Rio or even Ren?
BrylleAndrewJualo
Hey I just read your DAL fanfic and it was great! Hope to see more of its chapters in the future.
Yue_Best_Waifu
I was thinking about it, but there are a lot of inconsistencies over the years on Date a Live
1) It is mentioned that Mio meets Shinji (Shido) at birth, which goes back 30 years in the past, it is known that Shinji dies, and Mio absorbs him and turns Shido into her son....the problem Is that if Shido is canonically 17 years old....Mio had Shido in her womb for 12 years? (it is mentioned that while I was dating Shinji months passed, maximum 1 year).....if that was the case it is a bit shady
2) It is known that Yoshino canonically is 40 years old, but her appearance is that of a girl at most 10-12 years old, but it is mentioned that Mio gave her a crystal 25 years before the canon begins... that It means that she gave him a crystal at 17....then why does she have that size and small body, Yoshino did not have the problem of other animes where there are 40-year-old women with the body of a girl, it is mentioned that Yoshino's body left growing up when she became a spirit, which makes the issue of years confusing regarding her
3) Then it is mentioned that supposedly the first crystal he gave was to Kurumi, but Kurumi is younger than Yoshino, so it is strange and does not fit with it, in fact it is mentioned that Kurumi is 35-37 years old, so he gave her crystal 20 years before canon
4) I don't really understand the chronology with respect to the 30 years until the canon begins, it's too confusing and there are quite a few inconsistencies, another example is Kotori's theme, because she grew up as a spirit, when the others didn't. ? Was it because it was semi-sealed, which allowed it to grow unlike the others?
5)F
Yue_Best_Waifu
1) it's still shady that she had shido in her womb for 12-13 years
2) but it was mentioned in the novel that the crystal he gave mine to Yoshino was when Yoshino was bedridden in the hospital, I don't remember hearing something about her in another world, anyway it makes the explanation that he gave her a sephira first to kurumi incorrect, since the first was yoshino
RainSennin
@Yue_Best_Waifu 1. She also had to create the Sephira crystals after Shinji died, she didn't give birth to Shido yet. Creating the Sephiras took a long time and she can't really give birth to Shido without giving him the same ability that can seal this crystals. So the crystals came before Shido. 2. Yoshino was in the other world after being a spirit and unsealed spirits don't physically age. 3. Again, unsealed spirits don't age. I agree that this whole thing is confusing though. 4. Kotori got sealed by Shido right after she turned into a spirit so she grew up like him.
TrueMonikaSimp
YOU READ DATE ALIVE TOO?
RainSennin
I am not giving up on that Eroge fic. Matter of fact, I have written 15k for the new update. It's just a matter of being bored of COTE at the moment. And no new fanfics that are interesting enough. Plus, one of my favorite series just ended its anime run recently, so I have an itch to write for it.
That is all.
KrissMaverick7
@RainSennin you should try Bound from @Ayanokoji-Kyun, it is the Saint grial for Kiyozune fans
Cooldude33cc
@RainSennin while not having any Reigen updates does sadden me a bit, I have started a few other fanfics that should keep me occupied for at least a month, not to mention exams and such. As so, do understand that you can do what you want to author-kun. Have fun writing this new fanfic. I’ll give it a read sometime. Have a good day!
A4sterva
God, your work is something special, in my opinion the best cote fanfic, but when I see that the last part was 2 months or maybe more ago, I’m so sad
IronLegend125
Are you still doing the Eroge here, or on another website.
Cooldude33cc
Author-kun I just realised that kiyopon promised Sensei that he would reach class A within the year.
The next chapter is for the island exam, and I can’t wait to see what absolute Kiyotaka-like plans you’ve cooked up!
Gl author-kun
Hope chapter comes soon
:>
RainSennin
Bit late for this, but I hope you all liked the 3-part lemon fic that I wrote. I ended up having so much fun with it that I went beyond the 8k word limit for the lemon part, so I had to revise and cut off a lot of things there, but nothing major. If I don't win that Discord contest with this fic, I may just commit seppuku out of shame.
But now that it's over, it's back to Eroge writing like always. Before you ask, no, there will be no more chapters for that KiyoZuneKei fic. It's already marked complete, and it was only for a contest. If it left you wanting more, I'm just that good in writing lemons. ᕙ( : ˘ ∧ ˘ : )ᕗ
