RaptorRad

hey ill try to update soon been busy with homework ugh early college is stressful.

RaptorRad

@Princeshadeface You are so very welcome and thank you I know
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LucyBoal

Thanks for adding my oneshots book to your reading list!
          Let me know what you think.

LucyBoal

@LucyBoal No problem! ☺
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RaptorRad

@LucyBoal thanks ill go edit it
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LucyBoal

@LucyBoal I like the storyline but you need to use paragraphs to space out your work so it's easier to read. 
            
            Also every time a character speaks, you put it on a new line. 
            
            But the plot has me intrigued and I hope you're not offended by my advice.
            
            Keep writing, I'd like to read more!
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