Hello!! I've been writing since I was eleven and have finally managed to finish an entire book! I need your proofreading skills to tell me whether it's garbage or worthy of being published! Give me all the criticism you've got!!

A bit more about my writing style:

I have ADHD, so my attention needs everything I read and write to be attention-grabbing and vivid. I like to give juicy parts from start to finish. I love writing about people you can believe exist in scenarios that are believably fictional, with a dash of razzle-dazzle.

A bit more about me:

I was abused as a kid and have suffered with mental illness my entire life. I learned early on that I could escape anywhere, anytime through writing, and I've been addicted to it ever since. The more vivid the world the more beautiful and real the escape. It's my dream to create beautiful adventures for even the most clouded hearts.
  • JoinedSeptember 11, 2017

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Rapunzel1521 Rapunzel1521 Nov 11, 2019 01:13PM
I've begun the delicious but slow process of another round of proof-reading, and apparently when I pasted the parts from Google docs not everything got added, and some stuff got all jumbled. So for n...
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The Water Within  by Rapunzel1521
The Water Within
Bailey lives an average life until one night her ex shows up to tell her he inherited a company that employs...
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