
armygreenever
I just finished reading your book. I am sorry to say but it was disappointing. Cheating is normalised in it. I am not talking about that misunderstanding. I am talking about the time when YN saw both taehyung and Kathy half naked and even in TAEHYUNG'S POV he said he had a little make out session with Kathy. If he STILL loved YN he would have never done that. You think making out is a normal thing? Why we even read fictional books? Cuz we want someone who is same like us—LOYAL. But after reading this book , I felt more hate towards men. It's disgusting to read something like this. I wished they'll not end up together so I just went to last chapter only to get disappointed again. I am not hating , I am criticising. I know many readers had no problem with your story and that made me shocked like—didn't they read him accepting that he made out with Kathy when Yn was his wife? I mean it's really not good. Yn never made out with anyone after her marriage , why? Cuz she respected their marriage but what about taehyung? That jerk enjoyed with Kathy first and then with Yn. And when they first meet again after 3 years of break up , he said that "Kathy is better in intimacy than Yn" no one who loves someone will say this. Ever. PERIOD!!! Iam not hating you author ❤️. I am just telling my perspective which is completely right cuz he doesn't have any right to make out with Kathy after being married. I am your follower ❤️. I am looking forward to your another story in future and I hope it won't be like the FORCED MARRIAGE one. ❤️

armygreenever
@armygreenever I hope you'll return with something again ❤️. I can't wait for it. And I completely understand your situation when you wrote the book so it's ok , I am happy you'll return ❤️
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Raywrites_30
@armygreenever actually the thing is when I wrote this book i wasnt best at it. Like setting the plot or for the story. If today i read it i realise the only thing which I good to me is the scenes in book 2 . All the groveling at stuff rest the plot isn't the storyline isn't. So I will work on it and as I informed i wont writing ff anymore and will remove this to, soon. so in future I uploaded any you wont be getting any thing like this. Its just we improve with time and learn from mistakes. Thank you so much for this. I hope if I come up with something it wont be disappointing. Have a good day ❤️❤️❤️
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armygreenever
@armygreenever so if you'll write another story in future , will you please not add anything like this cuz it hurts and we get angry too. Comparison is bad. And cheating too. And if the male Is doing something like this which taehyung did in this book then make the female lead do same. ❤️
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