RedLantern16
Sentry OC or Reader
RedLantern16
Spectacular (Hellaverse x Reader x Marvel), will get it’s first chapter tomorrow
Yuri20052010
Hi, nice to meet you. I wanted to talk about your story, Hazbin Hotel, with a cool autistic reader. I'm also autistic, it's cool, but I wanted to talk about this harem thing. I think three of them don't work very well: Camilla, Roo, and Lilith. I don't think they work very well and take away the best part of watching. But as for mathematical security, it would be better, especially Camilla, who I think is more desirable than the others. It's just an opinion. I also think you could remove Cherri; she has a story arc with another character, and I don't think it would be very good to include her. Just some opinions. But if there's a problem, I apologize.
Yuri20052010
Sorry for any spelling and translation errors. I meant to say that perhaps Camila is more of a maternal figure; that would be better. I'm not very good at English.
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Jm4904191
Hey Red, in your marvel story I had this thought for all the non-human Marvel heroes reactions to Adams rant in TSMGO.
"Huh... that acually explains a lot...."
And the Mutants kinda get why humans are so awful to them.
RedLantern16
I just realized something. I’ll be able to go see Avengers: Doomsday, during my time at the DCP
LuisFilipeFigueiredo
When are you going to release the episodes of the Hellaverse stories?
CobraKaiOnePieceFan
Hey Dood, you can always also download your stories onto Inkitt, your lemon stories will be safe there
CobraKaiOnePieceFan
@RedLantern16 if you ever get an Inkitt account, let everyone know your username so we can follow you there
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RedLantern16
In my soul I am certain, in our sanctum of Hell (Hazbin Hotel x OC), will be updated tomorrow
RedLantern16
What should I do for The Legend of Korra OC
Autismoscream
@ RedLantern16 a dark avatar that is the avatar of vaatu. Creating a sort of love and rivalry mixed with a destiny where the two avatars have to kill each others to decide the balance of the world
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