Red Vermillion

Hi there! I'm Red Vermillion (pen name, ofc), 16y/o, male. I'm an otaku (I like shounen and seinen). I am a gamer, I play DotA 2, Heroes of Newerth, and League of Legends. 

This is my first time write my original story. My still on the process of making my first novel The Legend of Mageria. So, have fun on my first chapter and please criticize it if you can. Thanks!