Angel Ochoa

If so, then perhaps you can work on it.

Here are some examples: Catra looked at the soldiers marching at the building. "We're trapped" Catra said. "We've gotta get out of here." Kampan said.
            
            
            Luz shivered as she stood on the balcony. "Who's there." came a voice. Luz was very frightened.
            
            Kim clutched her rifle as she walked quietly. "I have a bad feeling about this." Velma said.

You should also write it as an actual story

@Red_Dragon108944 well hope your doing well ..

@Red_Dragon108944 also how have you been doing...

@Red_Dragon108944 yes!!! The Emenince in Shadow is freaking awesome, funny, for the first time I've found an Isekai anime that's freaking amazing to watch!!!

@Red_Dragon108944 I'm good with either...

@Attackingoreos Alright, thanks. Good to hear from ya again. 
            

@Red_Dragon108944 I think it’s good to try it out, it’s the writer who writes the story, so I say write however you like.

Im glad to hear that from everyone. 

@Red_Dragon108944 very good I liked it, it may me see Oklahoma in a whole new light. Hell if I ever get the chance to play Azur Lane again, I'll be sure to put her in my 1st fleet, and I'll likely oath her too... The fact that you had the male reader and Oklahoma build up their relationship, and the male readers relationships with the other shipgirls was pretty good ngl. Definitely one of my favorite books... And again it made me see Oklahoma in a new light...

@Red_Dragon108944 it's an amazing story. I don't know how many times I've read it

@GalandOfTruth1 Hopefully. I graduated from high school a week ago and start my job again in a couple days. But I do plan on continuing.

@Red_Dragon108944 will you update the unicorn x male reader?

Ok