Reverie_flowers

haha just posted that one story I wrote that one time-
          	@eclipsesgarden knows all about it, I'm sure :p
          	anyways, I was back for like 20 minutes after not touching this account for forever?? possibly leaving again?? idk, I had story notifications to respond to sooo...
          	
          	SHOUTOUT TO @kotlcandsokeefe bc she's been commenting on one of my reallyyyy old stories and I love it!!!

kotlcandsokeefe

You inspired me to write my own authentic story not a Fan-Fic!

kotlcandsokeefe

Thanks!
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Reverie_flowers

@kotlcandsokeefe Oh my goodness, that's amazing!! I'm so glad I could inspire you to write an original work! I would love to read it--that snippet of your Sokeefe fanfic was so lovely and it would make my day to see your writing style with original characters!
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kotlcandsokeefe

HELP I WANT TO KEEP THIS BUT I ALSO WANNA ADD *Spice* HELP!!
          
          Keefe: "Don't worry Keefe- we will catch her. Justice will reign." She reassured him, "Thank you Foster." He whispered before kissing her. "I love you, you know." She smiled through her tears, kissing him back just as fiercely. "I love you too, Keefe." They stayed like that for a while, holding each other and forgetting about the world around them. Eventually, Keefe pulled back, wiping his eyes. "Okay, you're right. We should get some sleep. We've got a long day ahead of us tomorrow."
          
          It's Sophie and Keefe from kotlc but I don't know~ KEEP IT LIKE THIS OR ADD MORE SPICINESS!?! AHHHH!!!

kotlcandsokeefe

@Reverie_flowers Ok thanks I *Think* I have it now.
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Reverie_flowers

@kotlcandsokeefe I THINK IT'S REALLY GOOD!! But, if I were to edit this, I feel like the last sentence/what Keefe says is a bit clunky compared to the tenderness of everything else. I feel like it should be worded a little bit differently to evoke the same feelings as earlier (so, stronger emotions. THE USE OF THE WORD "FIERCELY" EARLIER IS SO GOOD!)
            
            By *spiciness* what do you mean? If you mean flair, I think you could add a little bit more about them holding each other. Like, in books it typically describes ~how~ he's holding her, ~where~ their hand placements are (on her lower back, around her middle, etc.), ~and other things~, my personal favorite being his mouth/head is in/on her head/hair. You could also describe the tone of voice--was his voice smooth, and her's breathy? Something like that :p
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Reverie_flowers

FOLLOW ME ON PINTEREST! (get me to 300! please, I'm begging you, lol)
          
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Reverie_flowers

@GraceNichole5 Thank you! Btw, does C. still have access to your account? I'm sure S.H. has probably told you what's going on...
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ashis_awesome

I followed you:)
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Reverie_flowers

R.I.P. 
          
          Robbie Coltrane (a.k.a Hagrid, from the HP movies) You left a legacy behind for future generations  ♡

-olivegxrden-

@Reverie_flowers AHHH THATS SO SAD :CC
            
            I’ve listened to the first one about 10 times and the 3rd like 6 and then the second like 4 and the rest like 2 or 3 cus I’ve been listening every night for years <33 I was listening to the sixth last night
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Reverie_flowers

@-olivegxrden- *Late reply, XD* YES, HE DIED!! I was scrolling through YT and someone had made an edit for him and I was like, "that can't be true." So I looked it up and utter pain...which book in the series are you listening to? My personal favorites are 3 and 6 ♡
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-olivegxrden-

@Reverie_flowers WHAT NO HE DIED? AHHHH IM LISTENING TO HP AUDIBLE RN NO JOKE THATS SO SAD :CCCC RIP MY FAV GIANT <3333
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