RyukoSchnee
Alright, I need fluff ideas. Anything helps.
RyukoSchnee
RyukoSchnee
Update: this weekend will be a two parter. Both life is better with you and dancing in the light are getting updated at the same time. They both have something to do with each other as well, hence the longer wait for Chapters… and the fact that I had other things going on in life.
RyukoSchnee
I'm taking a small break from Life is better with you. It'll be a fews weeks or a month. My brain is just mush right now and I can't think about the story propperly. Do keep an eye out when the story does update. In the mean time I uploaded a little one-shot, go check it out, vote and comment if you'd like!
RyukoSchnee
So ovbiously I've been rewriting my most popular story, Life is better with you, and I was curious about what you guys thought about the new rewrite compared to the old one. The new one isn't close to be done, but I wanted to spend more time building the characters as well as not rush the romance that much (even though the slow burn is killing me and I'm the one writing it). So yeah, tell me what you guys think and what you are excited to see in future chapters.
amerdism
@RyukoSchnee A different ending would be nice and slowing the story down, it was a tad fast paced in the original and the ending came off that way too, with a 'miracle cure' coming out of nowhere. no build up. The 'cure' was also kind of disatisfactory as the story is about two people of different sizes so removing that element felt kind of wasteful I guess, an unsatisfying ending, maybe, either way I think the end of the original could of been better. Beyond that, not much, more fluff, maybe some hardship with tiny rights or something, stuff like that, more substance and plot that isn't pure fluff basically, all would be nice but despite these gripes with the original I still enjoyed it greatly.
doodkdkdodmd
hey, can I ask a question¿ what happened to School Girl? I really like the works you have done, I love your stories so much, that's why I ask dshdkdhdks
RyukoSchnee
@doodkdkdodmd In the wise words of Kratos... it died. Nah, but I had gotten to a point in the story where I genuinely asked myself "What am I doing with this story? Where am I going with it?" After I had introduced Iris. I've been thinking about making little short stories out of the school girl characters for the fun of it, but I've been busy rewriting Life Is Better With You
RyukoSchnee
wild
RyukoSchnee
I’ve moved on guys. I’m streaming video games on twitch, but I think I’m done with writing.
gokichan
@HgirlHero Aww, I'll miss you. But things change, I get it. Writing is a time-consuming hobby. Have fun, take care, and we'll be here if you come back <3
lesbianrin
Omg I knew I recognized you I remember finishing your story Life Is Better With You I loved that book and The Fox and The Tiger is really great too keep up the great work I'm definitely giving you a follow
RyukoSchnee
Yeah, that’s me. But I don’t know when I’ll get back into writing. I’ve been so busy with other things that I just don’t have the energy to write.
RyukoSchnee
I’m getting back into making more YouTube videos and writing. I’d really appreciate it if y’all checked out my channel or maybe even subscribed! Also another chapter of school
Girl should be coming out in a few days. Stay safe!
RyukoSchnee
Booba