NerdLion2004
Hi Author! I just finished reading “after the storm” and just want to say that I loved the beginning of the story I was smiling while reading it til I got to eh part(where MLs whole personality changed all of a sudden). I liked how you originally ended it cause you truely can’t force someone to love you like that, (tho imma say I honestly think the Ml won’t ever find someone who loved him like the FL did before all that fame) so the original ending was almost perfect what would have made the ending better in my opinion is after idk maybe a few years the FL does find someone who loves her wholeheartedly because I truly believe she deserves someone like that to spend the rest of her life with who’s not the ML. Have a wonderful day!
SM-Jacqueline
@NerdLion2004 Thanks so much for reading and messaging me! I'm glad the story resonated with you, and I agree that the original ending has some merit to it (which is why I ultimately kept it that way and added a "Bonus" ending. )Take good care!!
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