JustSomeoneElse

Hey y'all! So I've been writing for quite an extensive amount of time now. I knew that I had a talent from a very young age. The class was assigned to write a very shot paragraph using the five senses to use detail the best we could as fifth graders. Our teacher then put them all up on the board and we critiqued the works as a class - each work shown anonymously. The class and the teacher voted mine the highest and I had never felt more proud of myself than in that moment. I knew I had a natural talent I needed to hone. Fast forward to middle school, I started a fanfiction account on YouTube that became pretty popular and I was writing constantly. I'm now a freshman in college and slightly out of practice. So here I am again!
PLEASE critique my work and shoot me a message if you'd like. I'm open to penpals. :)