Sarah Robbins

My name is Sarah, though on most websites I go by Sasha Storm. Don't ask why haha. I kind of hate writing these bio things, because the moment I start writing, suddenly I forget everything about me that makes me, well, me! I'm just going to write a list of things I love.
1.) Harry Potter
2.) Making jewelry
3.)Harry Potter
4.) Doctor Who (ooweeeeeoooooooooweeeeeeeee)
5.) Perfume and other scented things
6.) I'm really into makeup
7.) Writing
8.) Harry Potter
9.) Star Wars
10.) The internet
11.) My family (some of the time).

There, now you successfully know nothing about me except that I defy most stereotypes by being a mega nerd and really into beauty. TADA!

So, anywho, I would really appreciate if you could give me some constructive criticism on my book I Am Flame. I wrote it as my NaNoWriMo novel (if you don't know what NaNoWriMo is, go google it) and though it is a completed novel I am fully aware that many parts of it suck. I'm really just looking for new insights before I start the editing process. Any helpful, not assholeish words would be greatly appreciated. Alrighty, well, goodbye then love!

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I would LOVE to be your editor! Just contact me, and we can trade emails so that you may send your chapters or ideas to me so I can edit them and give back constructive criticism. I want to help you, I swear! I've noticed a lot of people on sites like this have excellent ideas that are destroyed by horrible grammar. It can really ruin a story. I want to help! Contact me if you're interested!