Shadow9469

I think you should end the broken unrepaired story. 
          If you ran out of ideas then you should add this to the plot which is
          
          After hina dies Ash explodes and becomes a monster in the full sense of the word that destroys the world and annihilates all humans and Pokémon, but then Arceus and the Other legendary Pokémons use their power in space and time where Ash returns with his wife and daughter, where the world is restored and everyone comes back to life except the bad guys of course no one remembers Nothing except Ash and he is happy again with his family with the difference that Ash leaves Cynthia Diantha and Clair, since he prefers to let them go since his first love is the strongest

I just finished reading Forbidden Love and I save only one thing to say. 
          
          " Dude your the real life example of an underdog" like I was shock that you only have 128 followrers cause with these many amazing books you might be the single best Pokemon writer in the entire Wattpad I have seen so far. You truely are on another level as Pokemon fanfic writer 

Yo,lemme tell ya'a joke,
          Zeus was faithful to hera and respected women

"In this world, where will you belong Ash.. When all that remains around you are predators while you are a prey.."
          
          Ash ketchum strongly believe there is nothing left for him to achieve after what he had achieved.. Winning the league, becoming a champion was all that kept him going and now that it was complete, nothing motivated him.. 
          
          Boredome, tiredness, no speck of motivation was the only thing that he stood for himself.. As a blade left for long time, his sharpness begun to fade as he begun to act like a working member of society starting from Pallet town.. 
          
          Respecting his mother's wish to not take the throne and staying back at Pallet was what kept him busy- for all he was now was a shadow of his former self.. 'Ghost of the Ash ketchum' who defeated the world monarch, all the champions of the seven regions of the world.. 
          
          Gary says it begun that day, their struggle, all their fights, all that desperation in the peaceful town of Kanto which was their hometown.. Walking into the blood drenched house was a nightmare for him but he knew she was alive.. 
          
          The tape playing in the living room told him so.. And thus he clung to the last strand of hope he had.. The only thing he could do to see her back was join the experimental team which was supposed to take down the enemies.. As the man in the tape called them...
          
          All he knew was it was an forgotten experiment from the G-men shutte down years ago.. Join this story to discover the dark secrets of his family, the cold blood war waged in Kanto and his struggle to be final one standing.
          
          "It doesn't matter what path you choose.. Black or white.. Me and that guy, we will protect your future.."
          
          *BANG*

Bro I want to talk about a story idea I have.. Can I post it here...

Sayounara

I can only say that this has been a he'll of a journey. I still remember it, the time you posted 1 chap in about a week. That chapter in which Ash and Gary's back story was revealed and Ash's and Cynthia's meeting, Adrien, Those small fluffs....................... I don't think I will ever experience the feeling I do while reading your books. At last, I have request for you...........when you return, please remember me and be ready to look out because I am gonna surpass you in terms of writing!
          
          
          With that...Sayonara, sensei.

Yo. How are you shadow?

How have u been?
          Long time no chat, mate!

"~I again got lost in the path of life~"
          -Hatake Kakashi