a2010579
You should write a JJK Fanfic
Shamamaley
Shamamaley
should I Make a JJk fanfic? Or should I also make a Tokyo revengers one? And maybe some High-rise invasion too , I have way too. Many ideas but I'm lazy af
If y'all have any suggestions , I'm willing to take it
NOCTURNAL-SUN
@FamFubby jjk fanfic I just know if ur gonna write a high-rise invasion ff ur gonna kill off that one girl u don't like so fast
Akusa-chan
Hello! Your story was amazing, and I really like it, And Kim a new author and was wondering if you could read the first chapter of my first book, it's only 1 chapter but I wasn't getting any feedback as nobody had read it, and it's based off skateboarding pretty much, if you can read it and give it feedback for the second chapter that would be great, and if not that's fine also. Thanks! (Seriously tho this story is AMAZING!!)
Akusa-chan
@FamFubby thank you so much for the feedback I'll definitely work on that. Good luck to you and your stories!
Shamamaley
Hey! Uh I read your story all In all It's a great story to start off , the description of the characters are also well thought , and uh maybe you should also add a bit of spacing to the Sentences so it can look more organized and clean and it won't be so much of a hassle for the readers eyes , and for the readers to easily comment on that One part.
But all in all that's all I can say , I'm not a pro or anything , but spacing is one of the things I learned from one of my writer friends , that time I was on Journalism , but yeah I hope Your book gets well known the base story is really good and keep up the good work!!
Shamamaley
@Akusa-chan Hi! Thank you so much for reading my story and I'm glad u like it , it's my first fanfic so I was a bit skeptical , but yeah I'll go and check it out , and thank you for giving me this opportunity to read your work , I appreciate it alot.
Wonderyeet
Thanks for the votes! :^
Shamamaley
@Wonderyeet no problem , your story are very interesting to read , keep up the good work dude
NOCTURNAL-SUN
Hey
NOCTURNAL-SUN
@BRUTAL-BLOOD don't I look edgy here aggagagsg omg I'm so tempted to read ur fanfic but I'll restrain myself for my own sake