Shane_Yaley

If anybody has any suggestions on how to improve my story, then feel free to let me know. I care about my followers and want to help make my reading more enjoyable for you, so plz feel free to shoot me a suggestion every now and then.

Trinitymurphy35

Your story is really good so far, I'm looking forward to reading on, keep it up. Thank you for your encouraging comments about my story, and I hope we can give each other tips for the story's were wrighting, if that makes sense!!

Shane_Yaley

It makes perfect sense lol! I would love for us to help each other improve as writers. I’ll keep it up so I hope you will too!
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Shane_Yaley

If anybody has any suggestions on how to improve my story, then feel free to let me know. I care about my followers and want to help make my reading more enjoyable for you, so plz feel free to shoot me a suggestion every now and then.