AzurAnime
After looking at the reboot of the 4 worlds (I have never really read the original all the way through) I will say in my opinion (with respect) that the first two chapters (at least chapter 2) don’t feel like a prologue and feels like a fore shadow moment or a preview. It feels like their isn’t enough of a backstory to real cemented in the ground. In my opinion it feels like it was too rushed and that for instance theirs like no meetup with different time of countries with their governments or confrontation with the 1944 1962 or 2023 armies like the Americans or British when they meet up, etc. maybe I feel this way due to reading lots of gate stories and I feel like that this reboot will be a very good story. I will say this I’m not here to heavily criticize you or say “you suck” I want to be very respectful and give you some advice that I think could make it better but that is your decision to make.
ShotgunTH
@AzurAnime Would love your advice, I currently study and finding more info about how each nation organizes their army and units, I try my best (while try to counter all the stuffs that not make sense my assistant try to put in) to make this story the best and make much sense as I can, I will accept that first few part are really rush and it meant to just give yhe ground up for the reader so they don't have to go remember many of it later in the story which might cause confusion, I apologize for my bad English.
AzurAnime
Also if you don’t want the advice that is fine, I’m okay with that, and I won’t hold it against you
