authormazeen
Hi! Author please read my book, I’ll be obliged.
Book:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/367331035?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=authormazeen
Sugarcandy6
DBaranwal
P.s - (spoiler) the scene where Sidharth broke down telling that she should've just let him die was real heartbreaking and well written. And well that you write and portray emotions well.
Sugarcandy6
@DBaranwal Thank you so much. Hope you read Wrecked and give your well informed critique too. Thanks again!!!!
DBaranwal
So I finished all of your Bombay brides stories and I have to vent out something....It was good to see FLs who are not doormat, in fact they were grey shaded (with more shades of white obvio) which is how women or people in general are. You have improved in your way of writing from Doomed to spoiled.
What I didn't like was the victim blaming of MLs in your stories sometimes and the way they all were over forgiving when it came to their wives. Like for example Viren saw them kissing and obviously misunderstood the situation (which was his fault) but Aghanya blaming him for whatever happened afterwards. Nah, not cool. Secondly her repeatedly mentioning his trip to Bora Bora was a bit annoying.
Sakshi and Sid had toh many such incidents.
Please just try that Dhruv doesn't get victim blamed (though I haven't read wrecked yet) and even Vikram and if fl is wrong, she should suffer just the way of ML is wrong, he should suffer.
Ps- The note that you've written about r*pe is really commendable and much needed for many. Kudos to you for calling it out and using this platform for good. Maybe someone would get inspired by your words:-)
Sugarcandy6
@DBaranwal thank you for your honest review, I'll take your suggestions into consideration and improve!
DBaranwal
Hello author, finished reading doomed. It was a one time worth reading story and a good one at that. Though I often found the female characters a bit annoying. Also looking forward to read more of your works. Specially Veer and Jaanvi's story
Sugarcandy6
So some troll is upset that Sakshi is apparently a b*tch and Siddharth deserves better. And that I'm a toxic feminist. Now that person has reported Spoiled for privacy violations because Sakshi had recorded when something when she was a teen. Like I can't y'all.
I cannot keep justifying my characters and their motives. I thought my readers were smart enough for that.
Anyways, the whole drama is in the comment section of Chapter Thirty Four of Spoiled.
niasomani
@Sugarcandy6 that person was wrong for personally attacking you. You should report her / him. In my POV , I think sakshi has self victimized complex. You know,she had done some bad things too like slapping janhvi when she was pregnant. behave snobby with priya ( i know priya is villian but she didn't know that) and commenting on her dress during etc. I was atleast excepting a aplology From her side because sid has apologised countless times. But i guess she is more of person who redeem through action other than words.
dracarys1819
@Sugarcandy6 what I felt was that neither are wrong they both are in dilema and even though you are are an adult it takes times to navigate through such emotions.
Sugarcandy6
When I'm not updating in vacations:
What readers think I'm doing : ⛱️ ️
How my vacation is actually going: ️
sidneetian_unique
@515imauroranimini sacchi especially when you are in Maharashtra board, who wants to screw with ur life in every way possible NEP ke naam par
Sugarcandy6
Chapter Two of Till Destiny... Updated!!!!!
https://www.wattpad.com/1428929134
Sugarcandy6
Apparently PMs are permanently disabled on Wattpad.
So anyone who wants to connect with me personally can DM me on insta:
Link: https://www.instagram.com/sweet_shakkar
Sugarcandy6
Wow. Not Wattpad deleting all the PMs. So if you have an unanswered PM, message me again.
hkoriginal
@Sugarcandy6 Maybe to stop other writing platforms to promote themselves here. I'm not sure.
Sugarcandy6
Hey hey I'm still alive and kicking!!!! And my exams are over! I got a new job! And I'm free as of now soooo yes will start uploading chapters soon. Thanks for waiting!!!
