CroodsGirl

Hello, this is Catherine Victoria Christie (@CroodsGirl) with the Featured opportunity. I want to thank you for trusting me with your book to review. Aside from what I pointed out in the form, is there anything in particular you would like me to focus on?
          
          Thank you again!

Summer_SKY_9

Hey! First off, thank you so much for accepting my entry. 'In Black and White I'm Blue' is me trying out a genre I've never written in before, so any overall feedback would be awesome! I'm just hoping to get a feel for how it reads from a reader's POV, so I can see where to improve. ^^
            
            
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Summer_SKY_9

Looks like the scheduled chapter 'Good Days' is out! Happy Halloween I guess ^^
          
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          The world seemed to dim. The sun was still shining, the children still laughing, but something in the air shifted. A chill crept down Amelia's spine.
          
          The ice cream man smiled at her from behind the counter, but his smile was just a little too wide, a little too forced. His eyes... his eyes didn't match the grin. They were cold, empty, as if no light reached them at all.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/308173017

Summer_SKY_9

"I'm hot," Hiro mumbled, the beginnings of a pout forming on his lips. He looked more like a kid who'd been denied his favourite candy than a fully grown, very responsible, adult.
          
          "You are—" Riku started, then cursed internally. "Well, technically—but that's not the point!" He grabbed Hiro's hands, trying to pull them away from the belt.
          
          Every time Hiro tugged his pants down, Riku frantically yanked them back up. It was a ridiculous tug-of-war: Hiro trying to undress while Riku scrambled to preserve his modesty.
          
          ……… PANTS ………
          
          Happy Reading ;)
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/308173017

Summer_SKY_9

Both 'In Black And White, I'm Blue,' my experimental LGBTQ+ Romance and 'Two Times For The Past' Poetry Collection have made it to Round 3 in Ambys this year! 
          
          Congo to all who made it through! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/360272406

Summer_SKY_9

"It's a secret. For now, at least." You smiled at me weakly. "I've spent six months worrying about losing you, and I realised I wouldn't go down without a fight."
          
          "I don't understand what you're saying. Are you drunk?"
          
          "Rich, coming from a drunkard."
          
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          "You're an idiot, Ahen Lefevre," you murmured, a mixture of affection and exasperation in your tone. "But you're my idiot."
          
          …………………………………
          
          Happy Reading ❤️✨  
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/375449122

Summer_SKY_9

Is it just me or does everyone of my generation have a really f#cked up sleeping schedule? Like, just yesterday—or should I say today—around 1 in the freaking morning, I was casually folding laundry and tidying up my room. And now, woken up to the sun, I feel no different than a zombie. I might as well just crawl back into bed for a power nap or something.

FutureDiaryAyano

@Summer_SKY_9
            Not by choice I'm an insomniac
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