@T-Night Girl, writer problems for real. I had to call my cousin at like 8 in the morning yesterday to talk out some issues I was having with my story. It’s a- it’s the worst. Not to mention I will randomly wake up in the middle of the night with inspiration for some random fandom I’m in… it’s a problem.
From what I can tell, the story is absolutely amazing! I mean, I assume you’re talking about the Stars of the Fallen excerpts, and I have read those, they’re just- too amazing for words, honestly. You really are one of my main inspirations to keep writing, even when it’s hard and I don’t like what I have written, and my brain has to stop to figure out the very specific plant I have to completely make up so it does what I want, not to mention the burnout is real! But there you are, writing all your lovely stories, and it makes it all worthwhile, so thank you.
AHHHHH! ELITA IS MY BAE! Honestly didn’t know she existed until I watched Netflix’s War for Cybertron Trilogy(I grew up on Transformers Prime, which she did not make an appearance in, sadly). She remains one of my favorite characters in that show though, so I’m super excited for this!
I would love it if you stuck them in a doc! I honestly loved the story (Maybe I will always be a twelve year old at heart) and the characters. It was all interesting to me. I also love reading all manner of, what some might call, cringy works. I think they’re great though. Also, I kind of had a similar story for a different fandom I was in a while back, it was super complicated to be sure, but I had fun with it. It has changed a lot since then, barely even recognizable from the complicated, kind of cringy, twelve-year-old girl story it was, and is now even part of my inspiration for my original story! Mostly just some character personalities though.