ghostwritethewhip

Ahhh, your review was so sweet and I appreciated what you mentioned in terms of constructive criticism. I'm really going to have to go through what I've written and trim things down, but it is somewhat difficult as everything I've mentioned is a hint/foreshadows something later on. Hmm. You've given me a lot to think about, that's for sure! I'm glad I asked for your opinion. :)