TheAngel_1823

"You tried your best, but it was never enough." 

Komodo_Monitor

Thanks for adding my story to your list! Would you mind if I asked you to give feedback? What do you think what should happen?  Thanks!

TheAngel_1823

You're welcome, I think I ship Yui with Shin-ah? Cause they already have some history with each other than any of the characters, they only need some development, I guess? O_o
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Komodo_Monitor

thanks for replying! I'm honestly was thinking about making a consequense with a dragons power. or maybe loose some. I was also thinking about a festival and some one shots.  Actually I want to know... since I am horrible with pairing up people in fan fictions, who do you ship?
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TheAngel_1823

Hey there!! You're welcome authorcchi ^^!!  I like your story, especially when you added some benders ♪(๑ᴖ◡ᴖ๑)♪ and about what should happen.. Honestly I'm bad at these things  but, I will give it a try.
            
             I think that before the black dragon joins them, there should be a new enemy that prevents the black dragon from coming with them, and that enemy turns the table around, like instead of the black dragon thinking of them as allies, she will think of them as enemies.
            
            Or, while they're  at the village of the black dragon, the purple dragon will remember something, that will let her lose control of her powers. Then, unconsciously trap herself or her comrades  in her own illusions, and while that is happening, she will accidentally do something that will make the black dragon lose her trust or something like that (๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵). That's the only thing I thought of authorcchi _| ̄|○ 
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JuneOfHope

Thank you for adding my NGNL fanfic "THE_glitch" to your library. I hope you enjoyed it! And can I ask for some feedback? 'Cause I'm a little curious to know what my readers think about my story.

TheAngel_1823

You're welcome authorcchi!! I enjoyed your fanfic~ 
            I'm rather curious about Kaira, but there's something missing.. I don't know what is it.. But all in all, I'm interested of what she's hiding and what will happen next.
             (๑>◡<๑)
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