TheDoomSlayer05

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Holy shit okay totally didn't forget I had this app uhhhh... hi everyone it's been a bit so if you have any questions feel free to ask 

TheDoomSlayer05

*yawns* how long have I been asleep

Basilisk01

Could I ask you for some input on a creature or two I'm working on for RWBY, please?

TheDoomSlayer05

@Basilisk01 the Erljack is very interesting 
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Basilisk01

@TheDoomSlayer05 what do you think of these examples?
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Basilisk01

@TheDoomSlayer05 
            
            Erljack: a descendant of shrews that looks like a cross between a monkey and a rat, it poses a serious issue for humans and ecosystems. Able to hunt either alone or in packs of various sizes, they are consistently at odds with both humans and other Verandertiers. 
            
            - most Erljack's have some amount of venom and a limited form of echolocation, inherited from their shrew ancestors. An Erljack is sometimes able to emit a focused sound wave in the form of a sonic scream, and is guaranteed to gain this ability upon becoming an Erlking. 
            
            - when in large enough packs, the alpha adopts a form better suited to keep the others in check and maintain leadership, the Erlking. 
            
            - The Erljack has a volatile healing factor; allows them to heal minor wounds instantly, but taking too much damage can cause them to mutate and become extremely violent, even to others of its kind. 
            
            - they reproduce rapidly, and new forms will arise if enough generations pass. 
            
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CruderPlace13

Hey I just wanted to say thank you for all the comments and votes on book 1 in my series. It really means a lot to me, and no joke some of your comments actually gave me a good laugh. I hope you enjoyed it, and I hope you enjoy my other stuff if you decide to read it.

TheDoomSlayer05

@CruderPlace13 no problem and you're welcome 
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