Noah Suleyman

I'm an avergage teenager: I play guitar, paintball, I draw, run, love my amazing girlfriend (detectthesilence), and write. I currently have a trilogy, titled, "Grid", planned out 99%. I even plan on drawing a comic-strip-esque prolouge after the whole multi-decade ordeal is over. As for now, I want to release some of the first book in the series to get some feedback; I have a huge problem showing it to my friends or family, but the idea of showing it to complete strangers is fine...for whatever reason...so have at it! Feedback IS ENCOURAGED, negative, positive, or otherwise. Please note, it IS a novel, so it may take more than a lunch break to read.
     Enjoy! And remember, yes I'm a teenager, but don't hold back on the criticism as long as it's constructive!
          Huggies and kissies, 
          Noah Suleyman