TickleStoriesNow

Life of Hailey has been published! Be sure to check it out! I'd say it's pretty good. 

grimmnk

Always loved ur work,  these stories are basically a dream for me. I really miss receiving updates from this account, of course you should do whatever you want and need but do you think you're gonna write anything else in the future? I honestly think you have a talent for it, best of luck in whatever you're gonna do in your future 

IJudgeYourWork123

Guess I gotta add more, can't leave you on a cliffhanger after all. Your stories need more detail in order to entice and draw in more readers. This is especially important when it comes to erotic writing. Now I'm not too good with tickling, but I can still write a pretty good damn story involving it if I needed to. You must describe your main character in ways that convey their everyday moods and or emotions, this should happen before any tickling takes place. Why? It let's you know how the main character acts when they get down to business. For instance, is your character somebody who's gentle and sensual when they tickle their victim? do they enjoy teasing their victims with sweet words and or compliments? Do they look for their victims to enjoy it rather than themselves? Or are they Relentless and rough when tickling and enjoy torturing their victims mercilessly? Teasing with words that make the victim feel Powerless! You should also go into great detail on how they dress and what the enviorment is like around them. Two. Detail in actions is also important. You should try to add as much detail as you can when stuff goes down. This makes the story a lot more enjoyable. So rather than saying "she'd tickle her feet" you could try, "she'd wiggle her fingers all over her friends sweaty soles, giggling as she watched her friends feet wave and thrash, and try to evade her fingers." Or something like that. 

EC1888

Hey how is life your stories are great and you feet are cute  how old r u and what is you phone number

IJudgeYourWork123

@SpectreOrleans yeah, maybe. But if I see something, I say something. A little odd this guy's username is similar to EDP445's?
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IJudgeYourWork123

@EC1888 also I would just like to point out, nigga you're a pedophile.
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IJudgeYourWork123

Wtf. Dude. I don't wanna be a dick but. Your writing has no detail, I've gone through all your writings and there's absolutely no detail to what's really going on its just...tickle. I didn't even know what was going on in tickle high or whatever. Not to hate but it was just one big cluster. In the beginning it was just socks off and tickle? No reason on why it's happening? No big dramatic detail to the situation? No the main character feeling thrilled because they just got to touch feet?just "she'd now come up behind them and tickle their feet." That's it? Not "the grass felt like a million  little soft needles as she laid on her stomach, crawling towards the bench where her friend, (name) sat barefoot, waving their feet around in the green swaying grass. So With mischievous intent, (main character name) crawled like a soilder in a trench avoiding gunfire, yet making sure to stay as quiet as a mouse in the night. For this was finally her chance, she would finally get to tickle her friends feet, something she had wanted to do since she first saw her friends feet at their first sleepover together. Yada Yada." You get it. Also I can't help but notice that "your" feet look like that of a young girls, I'm guessing middle teens. Be caution of what you post. The internet is a vast place.