Twilght202110

Hey there, everyone I have posted an added more to my ongoing book Borderline Alice. I hope you enjoy and check out my other book a romance novel, The Four Realms.

TomTheFluffyFox

Hello! I was reading your story The Four Realms, and I’m quite enjoying it so far. If there’s any feedback I have, is that you should try spacing out your lines a bit between paragraphs, just so it’s not as jumbled. But other than that I like it.
          
          Also, if you ever have the time, I’d appreciate if you checked out my own story. I’ve been working on it for awhile now and it would mean a lot if you so much as looked at it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/365950851-path-of-the-dragon

TomTheFluffyFox

Of course. Thanks for checking out mine out btw. I’ll be sure to tune into your updates when I can as well.
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Twilght202110

Thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it. Love the feedback I always enjoy hearing y’all ideas to improve my story. I will take a look into your story soon. I’ll add it to my list of books to read.
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Twilght202110

Added a little extra to Chapter 3. I promise I will get back to my regular schedule soon and add more to the story. Chapter 3 is coming to a close soon. Let me know how I should end it. But for now I hope y’all enjoy!
          
          Kisses, The Author <3

Twilght202110

Hey guys! I’m newly starting out on my book “The Four Realms” and I would enjoy feedback on how I could improve it, make it better, or just adding things. I am still in the works of my third chapter so comments would help to end the chapter and move onto the fourth. Just let me know what you think and I hope you enjoy!