Unikornseatflowers

Why the hell do you guys keep reading Talk To Me? The new version is fine, but the old one is so awful and cringey, I can’t. Horrible pacing, the tone is off, it reads like a 13 year old wrote it (because a 13 year old did write it).

__punk__77

@Unikornseatflowers ISTG ITS GREAT- yes I agree with the comment above me it is a bit unprofessional and cringey but it still manages to get you hooked. I've read a handful of storys on wattpad and everyone's writing and plots have been unique in their own way so I'm very open to writing (the sound of an authors writing or paste of the story ect)  even tho yours wasn't perfect I'd admit I very much enjoyed it! BUT ANYWAYS HAVE A GREAT DAY 
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BookLover6473

@Unikornseatflowers I still think its good. Ok maybe its a little cringey and unprofessional but its cute and has good plot. I wish you would continue it or the rewrite
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Unikornseatflowers

Why the hell do you guys keep reading Talk To Me? The new version is fine, but the old one is so awful and cringey, I can’t. Horrible pacing, the tone is off, it reads like a 13 year old wrote it (because a 13 year old did write it).

__punk__77

@Unikornseatflowers ISTG ITS GREAT- yes I agree with the comment above me it is a bit unprofessional and cringey but it still manages to get you hooked. I've read a handful of storys on wattpad and everyone's writing and plots have been unique in their own way so I'm very open to writing (the sound of an authors writing or paste of the story ect)  even tho yours wasn't perfect I'd admit I very much enjoyed it! BUT ANYWAYS HAVE A GREAT DAY 
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BookLover6473

@Unikornseatflowers I still think its good. Ok maybe its a little cringey and unprofessional but its cute and has good plot. I wish you would continue it or the rewrite
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Frwrks

Hi it's 2019. I just finished reading talk to me bxb story. I just hoped that you could still continue the story. I've been wanting to see how adrian will try to save carter and how the story would end. Pleaaase. Give it a try, the plot is good. 

Unikornseatflowers

Okay okay okay. I don't know if any of you care still (honestly if you did it would be for an end to any of these stories). I have kept to my word and I've been working on improving my old stuff before I finish it. I'm doing Talk To Me at present and I'm at least halfway done with a new and revised chapter 1. As soon as I finish It I'll replace it. I'm going to leave the story up and just replace it chapter at a time however I really wouldn't put any faith into the old stuff. I'm going to be changing a LOT. Trust me. You'll see if you read the first chapter. ❤️