UniversalBri

Gosh, not me posting the first chapter of every story I have written. 

Asta_Dragneel_Star

pls update take my hand. I wan't to see what happens next. And can u add fairytail point of view in there soon and whats going on there

UniversalBri

Hopefully I’ll have a chapter soon. I’ve been going back and rereading/editing because I’ve lost place of what’s going on, but I’m glad you’ve enjoyed what has been written so far :) 
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UniversalBri

So I’m posting the first chapter of a new story, The Rising. This is only chapter one and later chapters won’t be updated until I finished The Sirens Song. Just putting that out there. I just want people to get a feel of this story before I post the rest. I hope you all could check it out sometime. 

UniversalBri

I’m in suck a funk right now, I have no idea what to write. I just don’t know what to do about it. Those reading Take my Hand, I have posted a chapter today, so I hope you check it out if you haven’t already. I was doing so good on my steady updates for that too. But it’s still on time so it’s ok. So I just wanted to say that, but yea, If I don’t update I just can’t think of anything. Happens a lot but I usually get past it. Just realized I wrote a whole paragraph instead a short message like I was going to do, so if you read till the end, yay! I’m so sorry for my rambling. Hehe. 

UniversalBri

Does anyone want to read my story The Sirens Song and tell me if it’s any good? Because about no one has read it, and I’m not going to discontinue it or anything but I just want someone’s opinion. I don’t want to force anyone into reading it but I was just wondering if anyone would be willing? It’s ok if you don’t want to. As I said before I don’t want to force anyone into reading it, and I don’t want anyone feeling like they have to read it. 
          
          Thanks lovelies~

fox1648

@UniversalBri of course keep it up! I cant wait to see what happens next
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UniversalBri

@fox1648 Oh! Thank you so much for the feed back. I might have forgotten about that part so I’ll be sure to switch it up. But thanks a lot for reading it! 
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fox1648

@UniversalBri I've been reading it here and there and I'll say it's pretty damn good, it's really well written. Tho the fact that she wasn't sent to a hospital for her condition bugs me to no end solely because that is what happens when you show up with no fat on your bones and  years of abuse plus I'm pretty sure that an orphanage would be highly required to send someone in that state and condition to get properly checked out and make sure they have all their shots and whatnot
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UniversalBri

Can someone answer me this. Please answer truthfully. Ok, so if you are texting a person that you don’t talk to usually, and send a ‘hi’ and then the other person sends a ‘um hi’ back. Does that seem too antisocial to you guys? Like makes you not want to respond back? This is just for personal knowledge. Like I just want to know...

queen-nerd

@UniversalBri or ok I'm also not a good conversationalist 
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UniversalBri

@queen-nerd thank you for the feedback.  I can see why you’d think it would be awkward but I’m not a good conversationalist so I don’t respond further if they don’t text back  
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queen-nerd

@UniversalBri well for me I would think that the conversation would be awkward at the beginning but if u start to talk more into the conversation the awkwardness would start to fade. I'm not sure but that's just me
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