VHSenjoyer

I AM FREE FROM EXAMS!
          	I AM BACK IN BUSINESS!
          	How have you all been those few months?

The_WatchMan_Of_Doom

@VHSenjoyer heya hru

The_WatchMan_Of_Doom

@VHSenjoyer Well First Off,Yeah I Can See That,The Centered Text Is Gonna Be Used More Often Than Not I Guess Also Thank's For Liking Ness's Concept,I Didn't Think Somebody Would Like His Concept But I Appreciate It Also Yeah,I Can See That,Then Again Dude's The Equivalent Of A Mastermind Who Plan's Ten Step's Ahead Of His Enemies(Whom Are The Balancer's) And Somebody Whose Own Ally Question's On How He Managed To Even Convince A Literal Forbidden To Be One Of Their Allie's Alongside The Whole Faction He Lead's-
            
            
            Also About His Leg's,Kinda Forgot But They Do Actually Have Armor,It's Just I Forgot To Point It Out
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VHSenjoyer

@ The_WatchMan_Of_Doom  Started to look at it. The centered text is crazy confusing. Kinda like Ness concept minus a little detail, HOW THE HELL ARE YOU GOING TO USE ALL THAT ARSENAL IN THE HISTORY? The guy doesn't need half of it, even his hands are a plus at this point. Legs? A weakness. If you manage to make something coherent with that I raise my hat.
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The_WatchMan_Of_Doom

@VHSenjoyer Good To See Your Doing Fine My Pal And Am Doing Good,Anyways You Wanna See My Book?, since you haven't seen it
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The_WatchMan_Of_Doom

Heya

VHSenjoyer

@ Titan_Tvman_0782  Taking years to answer but yeah I am good (exams week finally ended, I am free).
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Warfish127

Last breath update when? Also is the story of last breath gonna reach where other au will be involved just asking because there has been no last breath story that include him interact on the other au's

VHSenjoyer

@Warfish127 Also if you want to try something new, my story Prohecies heries could interest you. But for Last breath rewritten i am going to push myself to do it as i really like it.
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VHSenjoyer

@Warfish127 I would prefer not in this story specifically as i really want to rewrite the AU in an original way with Gaster's mysterious abilities. But after i would, don't have any idea on how to make it balanced tho, I hate Op for no reason OC's.
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VHSenjoyer

I would like some critics, i have been quite irregularly writing my last story chapter, that's true it's not about that, i want an honest opinion about my writing style, good points, bad points, both, i just want to have something to work on.

VHSenjoyer

Also passing to 2 chapters a day, it makes the things easier for my head to get wider ideas going above what i would do as i forget half my things when i only write one, ending up with a different yet satisfying result that changes how i want the story to turn but in a good way.

VHSenjoyer

As you may know, i write both LB: Rewritten and Prophecies heroes in alternate, should i just focus on prophecies heroes or keep it this way?

VHSenjoyer

@Jakeyessir I guess i can, also i am fine and you?
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