Ashley

@Vampxgirlxbl Well done, I'm excited and happy with your planning! Everything will work out, as I write about my character's past, I realized that a lot of things in the future should be changed, or that things from the past should be changed to fit with the future. The fact is that we've enhanced our stories so that they have a coherent personality, and basically my character is my real personality of how I deal with things in life, but I don't have the power to do that Unfortunately haha!

@Calisto1999 The current book has more of a preteen audience ,which was my  intention when I wrote the book, and now, as I edit my new audience, it is adult. Preferably 25+. I have an amazing character development for Summer, and she has so much growth potential. She is only 19 now, and I have the rest of her life to write about.

@Vampxgirlxbl The problem I am having is that the story is done, and I have also started part 2 of the book. As I am editing before I do my weekly uploads, I find myself taking some of the chapters in a different direction. I'm adding more depth to the characters , and my storyline may be changing. I wrote the book a few years ago, and since then, I have grown as a writer. I want the book to fit the more advanced writer that I am now. Which is causing me to do alot of editing.  

@Vampxgirlxbl Yes! The ideal is to let things flow and not be in a hurry to write so fast otherwise everything loses its meaning, or things get boring for your creativity.
            I understand, we have little time. But if I may say, it's okay if you can just read mine later, I've tried to fit historical events into my story, some are in the years that actually happened others although out of context of the time for 1 or 5 years, still fit. I'll write an epilogue when this one is over... Or maybe it separates into two parts, but it's better to leave it all together.

@calisto1999 , I like the idea of extending my update days. I'm going to switch to Bi weekly. I can't wait until I get a moment to sit down and read your story. I've already added to my library. Oh, yeah, i was definitely not going in a twilight direction lolz

@Vampxgirlxbl No problem, my story for example updates once a month, I prefer long chapters due to the update time. I loved the direction your story is taking, at first I believed it would have a direction like "twilight" and thank the gods it didn't. I prefer the image a classic vampires, where the older ones have the mystery in them, my story is like that, but it tells about the birth of one and its trajectory narrated by the vampire herself.