VenomousKiss

To readers of: [Legolas] In every grain of sand, is the story of the earth.    
          	
          	I was unhappy with the way chapter 18 read (it left out some vital points and seemed rush towards the end) so I've changed the second half of it. While you won't miss out on anything by not re-reading it, the story will flow better if you do.
          	
          	As usual, any constructive criticism is welcome.
          	
          	I'm also toying with the idea of a sequel as this is coming to a close, let me know what you think.
          	
          	
          	-VenomousKiss

VenomousKiss

To readers of: [Legolas] In every grain of sand, is the story of the earth.    
          
          I was unhappy with the way chapter 18 read (it left out some vital points and seemed rush towards the end) so I've changed the second half of it. While you won't miss out on anything by not re-reading it, the story will flow better if you do.
          
          As usual, any constructive criticism is welcome.
          
          I'm also toying with the idea of a sequel as this is coming to a close, let me know what you think.
          
          
          -VenomousKiss