
Nickay_88
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Hi! I just discovered your story a while ago and i just want to say I really like it, it’s full of emotion and beauty. I just wanted to suggest if maybe can you break up some of the long paragraphs into shorter ones. Sometimes it gets a little hard for me to read and follow,it's confusing me that i have to read it again because I'm getting lost in the words,especially when there's a lot in one chunk. I hope that’s okay to say! Thank you for your lovely work.