Nickay_88

Hi! I just discovered your story a while ago and i just want to say I really like it, it’s full of emotion and beauty. I just wanted to suggest if maybe can you break up some of the long paragraphs into shorter ones. Sometimes it gets a little hard for me to read and follow,it's confusing me that i have to read it again because I'm getting lost in the words,especially when there's a lot in one chunk. I hope that’s okay to say! Thank you for your lovely work.
          

Lirienee

Absolutely live your writing style and ideas. The one i like the most is about singing power so i though if you plan writing another fanfic with singing how about onepiece or thevampirediaries or even reincarnatedasaslime(not sure if that how its named)❤️

Carnelianstar

Hello wingquirker, I saw your new story. Your character should have couple more Pokémon including the trainer profile and which twist boys is going win her heart. 

Carnelianstar

Does your new character have name in new story or something else, did you read twist boys will win girl heart. Do you have favorite twist boys in the game
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Wingquirkuser

@Carnelianstar  I deleted that story it was to much for me so I decided to make a new one. And I’m going to make this one better and trust me your going to love it.
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