Dallas Wonders

She's never coming back ;(

You definitely can write. 

Mmm can you make some more stories 

The new story is titled The Greed Within and follows the love story of  a young man named Silas

I agree totally with what you wrote in your description. 

I wanted to ask if I could base Natalia's looks on Zendaya and Nicholas' looks on Brooklyn Beckham because I thought they would look like a cute couple. Let me know what you think! 

Oh wow @mentally_with_llamas thank you so much. You're perfect too. I appreciate the love you're throwing this way and I want to thank you for reading. Knowing i still have people who read my books, it makes me so happy. Keep looking out though. I'm starting a new series that will be out tomorrow!

I wanted to post this here for your not sure if you'll see it in the comments section :
          
          At the end of the day you have to write because you love it you can't base your happiness of how your book is or the success off of how many people support it. Write because you love it and take the harsh comments with a grain of salt. Remember this is the Internet and there are trolls. Also remember your book reaches all people young and old some of your readers maybe to young to really understand what's going on. Or how love is a complicated thing and takes time to work out the kinks of two lives coming to get to be one. A kid doesn't make a man stay and it doesn't make the love prevail. Just write for you and it will be fine. 

hey! please read my first bwwm story and give me any feedback

no prob. I'm kinda lost on where to take it, but if you could just read it and give me some feedback, I'd highly appreciate it.