WriteroftheRa1n

i really enjoyed chapter 4!!! i cant wait to read the next chapter when its published!!!

WriteroftheRa1n

of course!!! same goes with me!!!
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Writer9192

If you have any comments or criticisms either let me know!
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Writer9192

@WriteroftheRa1n thank you!!! I'm trying to upload once every Sunday, so look forward to next week! 
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WriteroftheRa1n

how did you like ep. 2 and 3?

Writer9192

@WriteroftheRa1n sounds good, I will! 
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WriteroftheRa1n

thanks for the input!! ill try to work on that in my next story(which i am currantly writing the first part to) so maybe chack it out when its published? {if you want to that is}
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Writer9192

@WriteroftheRa1n I like them! The one thing that I would love to see more of is more descriptions of the environment. I think asylum are a creepy place, so I'd love to hear more details about what it's like in there!
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WriteroftheRa1n

its the creater of "from the inside of a box"!!! i just wanna know how you like my story and if you have any suggestians!! im having hard-core writers block and need ideas!!! 

WriteroftheRa1n

just posted it!!! hope you like it!!! comment or send feedback plz!
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Writer9192

@WriteroftheRa1n oooh, cool! I hope it helped! Thanks for telling me that, I appreciate it!  I can't wait to read part 2!
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WriteroftheRa1n

im actually writing more on part two!! i took a look at your profile page and i got some insperation!! and thanks for the input! i think youll really like what i added! it will be published soon btw your detective story is on my read list! just figured you would want to know that
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