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When your book sucks so bad, you only have the amount of reads that there are chapters...

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Currently on vacation, but I've been thinking about 'Empty' anyone think I should add a bitter stepmom in the picture? 
          
          I'm thinking stepmom will kick Ayako out and throw her to Brie and Nate where Brie would bully the hell out of her. 

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I'm currently drafting an idea, I'm picturing that Kovu and Kiara get new siblings (They'll have a hand in the story..) But.. Let me give you a little teaser from my draft.
          
          "Oh pathetic! You're just running around, skipping training. You're such a wimp!" Zira ridiculed her son, who sat submissively, keeping his head down to avoid her never ending, erratic abuse. "Go back there and spar!" She shoved him forward. The young lion made cold eye contact with his elder brother, but glanced back at his young siblings who frowned and trembled in guilt. He turned away from the match. "No." Kovu refused. Zira gasped. "You little rat!" She snarled, her rage boiled. Kovu made his way back to his brothers and sister, whom he'd defended. There was a moment of silent tension. "You've been sneaking off..." She whispered to herself. "You've been to the pidelands behind my back haven't you?" She held her head high. He remained silent. A cheeky grin grew across her face, he loathed her twisted joy. "Then you may go back.. And start the mission early."
          
          PLEASE NOTE, THIS SCENE MAY OR MAY NOT BE CHANGED. THIS IS ONLY A DRAFT TO HEAR YOUR OPINIONS, IF YOU WOULD LIKE ME TO TRY AND PEACE THIS STORY TOGETHER.

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@RebelliousDragon Good to know, I've been hesitating on it.
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RebelliousDragon

@Wuttquad Sounds awesome! I'd like to read it!
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