XVioletHeroes

Good news I can publish so far again.
          	I'm taking this time also to edit my Loki story since I'm not happy with it.
          	
          	School is getting much of my upcoming time so I don't have time to work on the Outlander one since I have to re-watch the series  together with writing.

Lils3583

Hi, I really really love your outlander stories however i have some feedback. I hope this doesn’t offend you in any way, I’m just trying to help :). 
          
          1. The dialogue is all in the Scottish accent which can be hard for the reader to decipher at times. 
          
          2. I understand that English isn’t your first language and so I completely understand little small errors. But most the time when you say ‘mine’ it should usually be ‘my’, I thought I’d let you know because it’s not only something that can help your stories but also assist you with your English overall :).
          
          I hope I haven’t offended you, because that is not at all my intention, I do really enjoy your stories!

XVioletHeroes

@ Lils3583  Hi Lils. No you didn't offend me at all feedback helps me grow. On point 1. I Know it's hard to decipher and I tried to make it a less harder. Believe me some words doesn't even sound the same in English so it tried to keep them in English or let Jamie explain them later. Point 2. I recently read my story back and I noticed it as well.  the first book was three years ago and back then my writing was not so good in English. Hopefully I grew over the years but I think that mistakes are still there in the other books again thank you for the feedback
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TheChineseGovernment

Hey, I'm currently reading your outlander fic, and I think it is rlly great, and well executed. I would just like to give you some honest feedback. 
          
          When writing a character with an accent you dont need to write the accent into the dialogue it makes it very confusing for the reader to decipher what they are actually saying. Simply state early on they have an accent and occasionally drop the fact they have an accent throughout the narrative.
          God, I hope that didn't sound too bitchy
          
          Other than that, it is truly a great read. Keep going, you are rlly good Xx

XVioletHeroes

@ TheChineseGovernment  hey. No you don't sound too bitchy at all. I always find honest feedback better than lied feedback. I decided too keep the accent in because I really liked it. I sometimes changed the words in English because it was to hard to translate en decide to translate some words later on. 
            
            It will continue on in the next four books so apologies in advance. 
            
            If you want to know some words your always free to ask me the translation
            
            And thank you for the love for the book.
            
            Xx
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XVioletHeroes

Good news I can publish so far again.
          I'm taking this time also to edit my Loki story since I'm not happy with it.
          
          School is getting much of my upcoming time so I don't have time to work on the Outlander one since I have to re-watch the series  together with writing.

XVioletHeroes

It's seems that I have problems publishing chapters for the past two days.
          I have deleted wattpad lf my phone and reinstalled it.
          So don't worry I'm not gone but Wattpad won't let me publish it

XVioletHeroes

Ps. Also I can't open my stories now aswell  I'll try it tomorrow again. Sorry for the delay
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TaylorRoss115

I just stumbled across your outlander series and I screamed. I'm so excited to read it. There isn't enough fanfics out there. Love it already. 
          
          You are amazing. Thank you so much for writing this.

XVioletHeroes

@ TaylorRoss115  hello. Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm glad you like the series
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