Alexandria Murphy

If I told you, it wouldn't be fun to read. But since you are my favorite Watty writer, if you message me, I could kinda tell you my layout you wanted. Thank you for the really good tips! I'll follow up on those! 

@thesoulessvampire now I'm curious to see what the problem is! 
            
             Hmm. . . As for tips, I gotta tell you to continue writing from the heart because the main thing is that you enjoy writing. If you just write for other people's entertainment, it will only cause you stress and diminish your love for writing. Just one tiny, minor suggestion would be is to separate the words a character is saying because that could get confusing, like when another character is speaking, start another paragraph. 
            
             "Hey," Fionna said. "How are you?"
            
             Marshall shook his head and stubbornly turned away to hide his blush. "N-nothing's wrong. Shouldn't you be going on your date with hothead?"
            
             And that's about it. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for suggesting it to me! 
            
             P.S. Will FP stop being a problem because Fionna catches him with Flare? 

There's going to be a problem, but not a love triangle problem. I still have to write it though. It's more of an physical problem than emotional. I'll start writing tonight and see how far I get. Thanks for reading my story! Do you have any tips for me?

@Jedi_K @Jedi_K Let me just say that you're an AMAZING writer and I cannot wait until you post the next one-shot. And we do have some of the best in common: I draw and write whenever I can and I love taking walks (but I prefer them at night). My favorite anime at the moment is Seven Deadly Sins ^_^

@SHE3584 I just updated ^-^ i'm sorry for the wait!