Zari_Knowles

I’m over here like ‘wdym Ray is mellow???’ Y’all I made her like that because Tay’s there!!!! I’m like that too, I’m mean or chaotic whenever I’m out by myself, but with my siblings I gotta make sure they don’t get us in trouble so I get more ‘mellow.’

Zari_Knowles

I’m over here like ‘wdym Ray is mellow???’ Y’all I made her like that because Tay’s there!!!! I’m like that too, I’m mean or chaotic whenever I’m out by myself, but with my siblings I gotta make sure they don’t get us in trouble so I get more ‘mellow.’

Zari_Knowles

TEST RUN TO SEE IF WE LIKE THE REWRITE

yk2wavvy

I really like the old one, I like that we get to see her and Beck’s interaction more and how her personality is. I’m still stuck on the old names so it’s hard for me to change into the new ones cause I feel like the old names match the characters more. I like that we see Rays interacting with her family and Cat and how we can see that they love each other and have each others back. The new one is cool, I like that we saw more Tay and Jade, I feel it’s just a little out of place and Ray is a little more mellow than before. All together I like seeing Tay and Jade in the new one and Ray not liking Tori as much, if you could mix both old and new it would be really good but that is totally up to you. My vote is still on the Old one <3
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fanskilledtheworld28

I really really love the old version because of how Ray’s character was and the interactions we had between Beck and Ray, there were some parts that were a bit cringe but not too much and was still REALLY good. I like the in depth back stories of the new version and I’m a huge fan of Tay and Jade of course. I just wonder if there’s a way to kind of intertwine the two and come to a sort of median. Your writing is AMAZING and this is literally my favorite Beck/Victorious stories. I just feel like the new story is a little too “tame” is like the only word I can think of
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1-800-MrsHotchner

@Zari_Knowles i like both versions the old is good because we got to see Ray being a badass but i think the new one gives more background information on what went on in life also i like seeing the relationship between jade and tay in more depth. i also love that in this one ray doesn’t like tori and doesn’t give her as many chances as she gave in the previous version of the book
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Zari_Knowles

GUESS THE CHARACTERS AND GET THAT CHAPTER PLUS THE ONES BEFORE IT
          
          
          
          
          
          
          "'Clothes?!' Yuh lose yuh fuckin mind!?"
          
          "YuH lOsE yUh FuCkIn MiNd."

Zari_Knowles

@BigBudussy12 I’ll give it to you just bc you got the right book
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Zari_Knowles

@miya64526 Nope!! Close!
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miya64526

@Zari_Knowles is it badass
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