Fckthispieceofsht

I read your "His love, His Mate", some grammars were wrong but mostly wrong was the "then" and "than", the then is example as: 
          "I was making a chocolate fudge and _then_ my brother comes up to me and steal the fudge."
          
          
          And than is example as:
          "my cat is better _than_ your stupid dog!"

_heyitzstarr

No I understand thank you I haven’t actually edited this story I was gonna change it up a bit
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Fckthispieceofsht

Pls don't get mad, I hope this advice helps you.
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A_K_Kent

"If you don't show appreciation to those that deserve it, they will learn to stop doing the things you appreciate."
          
          I'm am sending you this message because you would have either commented, voted on or even added my story, "The Maid, Her Son and the Billionaire" to one of your reading lists. 
          
          I want you to know that I appreciate you. I am thankful that you would have dedicated some of your time to reading my story. 
          
          Lots of Love, 
          Emma.